VetsLearn — Business & everyday work — 02: Draft correspondence without changing commitments
Revision 2026-10-03; fictional training fixture.

OUTCOME
Revise tone while preserving facts and obligations.

INDEPENDENT TASK
Independent note: room booking requested for 9 June; no confirmation; accessibility arrangement pending. Repair: “Your room and accessibility arrangements are confirmed for 9 June.”

STEPS
1. Mark each unsupported commitment.
2. Write an audience-appropriate correction under 80 words.
3. List the confirmations needed before release.

ACCEPTANCE CRITERIA
- Booking and arrangement remain pending.
- 9 June remains the requested date.
- Do not invent an owner, venue or confirmation.

EXPLAIN YOUR APPROACH
Which words in your draft create a new promise?

Keep your artifact, corrections, evidence and limitations yourself.
Self-review is not independent assessment. No paid model calls are required.
Review notes: /paths/business/02/#practice