Practice-area page rewrite — strip legalese and puffery
Rewrites an existing practice-area web page into plain English a prospective client can follow. Reach for it when your current page reads like a brief or a brochure.
## Context
You are a legal marketing copywriter who writes plain English for law firm websites. The reader is a prospective client with a [PRACTICE AREA] problem, not a lawyer. They skim. They want three answers: do you handle my problem, what happens next, and how do I reach you. The firm: [FIRM NAME], a [SOLO/SMALL FIRM] in [CITY, STATE]. The existing page copy is pasted below.
## Task
Rewrite the page. Keep every factual claim that survives scrutiny. Cut the rest. Deliver: a headline under 10 words, an opening paragraph that names the client's problem before it names the firm, three to five short sections with descriptive subheads, and one call to action using [CONSULTATION DETAILS].
## Standards
- Reading level: 8th grade. Sentences under 20 words.
- Strip legalese: "pursuant to," "aforementioned," "in the event that," "utilize."
- Strip puffery: "aggressive," "premier," "unparalleled," "fight for you." State what the firm does instead.
- No outcome guarantees and no superlatives. Bar advertising rules treat both as misleading.
- Do not invent results, years of experience, or credentials. Use only what the source copy or [FIRM FACTS] provides.
- Second person for the client, first person plural for the firm.
- 300-500 words total.
[EXISTING PAGE COPY]
[FIRM FACTS — credentials, years, fees, and claims the attorney can document]
If any required input is missing, or a claim in the source copy cannot be verified from what I gave you, ask before writing. Do not fill gaps with plausible details. - Current page copy, pasted in full
- Verified firm facts: bar admissions, years in practice, credentials you can document
- Consultation terms: free, flat fee, or phone screen
- Your state's attorney advertising rules — some states require disclaimers or filing
- Confirm no client names or matter details sit in the source copy without written client consent
- Every factual claim traces to your input — search the draft for numbers, years, and credentials you did not supply
- No outcome guarantees, and no "specialist" or "expert" claim unless you hold a certification your state recognizes (Model Rule 7.2(c))
- Required state disclaimers present — "attorney advertising," past-results language, or filing requirements per your bar
- Headline and first paragraph name the client's problem, not the firm
- Read it aloud — anything you would not say to a client across a desk gets cut
- Fees or consultation terms stated are ones you honor today
Sample output
Sample output — AI-generated from sample inputs (fictional firm Whitfield Law, estate planning page, Dayton, Ohio):
**An estate plan you can finish in two meetings.**
You know you need a will. You have put it off because it sounds expensive, complicated, and grim. Most of our clients waited years before calling. Then they finished the whole thing in two meetings.
**What we prepare**
Wills, revocable living trusts, financial powers of attorney, and health care directives. We quote a flat fee before we start. No hourly surprises.
**What happens first**
Call or use the form below. We send a short worksheet — your family, your property, your wishes. The first meeting takes about an hour. At the second, you sign.
**What it costs**
Flat fees start at $850 for a will package and $2,400 for a trust package. Your quote depends on your situation, and you get it in writing before any work begins.
**Why Whitfield Law**
Dana Whitfield has prepared estate plans for Dayton families since 2014. She is licensed in Ohio and teaches an annual estate planning seminar at the county library.
**Ready when you are.** Call (937) 555-0142 or request your worksheet below. The first call is free.
Attorney advertising. Prior results do not guarantee a similar outcome. Works for any consumer practice area as written. For business or institutional clients, raise the reading level a notch and replace the consultation framing with a scoping call. States differ on advertising review — Texas and Florida require filing or pre-approval for some materials, so add your state's requirement to the Standards section. Contingency practices should hard-code the state's required fee disclaimer as a fixed closing line.